I lost a couple of key words in that last tag that indicated Neal delicately placed the crown on Malcolm’s head, so he does it in this tag instead as Malcolm turns to look at him.
There might be a bit of fussing with it to make sure it sits at the most attractive angle, the shades bringing out the subtle reds in Malcolm’s suit and the blue of his own eyes as well. Neal leans in to kiss him. “I would suggest either a spoon, a fork, or a new grape.”
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There might be a bit of fussing with it to make sure it sits at the most attractive angle, the shades bringing out the subtle reds in Malcolm’s suit and the blue of his own eyes as well. Neal leans in to kiss him. “I would suggest either a spoon, a fork, or a new grape.”