[ Aziraphale will do enough unbroken staring to cover eye contact for the both of them. The least ideal solution of all time, but it is what it is.
This part makes more sense. Helps line up the full story, sounds more familiar. Stacks on, puts feeling back into his fingertips. ]
Other demons couldn't have managed to be friendly with me, either. You're very unique. [ He loves him. It doesn't have much to do with the task at hand. Doesn't contribute. The Eye already knows it, which is. A thought.
Aziraphale doesn't have anything that's solely his anymore. It puts a hitch in the veneer, punches out a quiet breath. But what did he expect. ]
Why not Adam?
[ If nothing else, it sounds much more like a normal question.
He thinks that despite the brief conversation they'd had before, Crowley might let him pick him apart for nearly as long as he likes. He thinks with things as they are, he was right; it wouldn't be a matter of letting him anyway.
The moment where Aziraphale is pulled towards that prospect, considers it, isn't a terrible one. Quite the opposite. The moment off on the horizon is slated to be terrible. ]
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This part makes more sense. Helps line up the full story, sounds more familiar. Stacks on, puts feeling back into his fingertips. ]
Other demons couldn't have managed to be friendly with me, either. You're very unique. [ He loves him. It doesn't have much to do with the task at hand. Doesn't contribute. The Eye already knows it, which is. A thought.
Aziraphale doesn't have anything that's solely his anymore. It puts a hitch in the veneer, punches out a quiet breath. But what did he expect. ]
Why not Adam?
[ If nothing else, it sounds much more like a normal question.
He thinks that despite the brief conversation they'd had before, Crowley might let him pick him apart for nearly as long as he likes. He thinks with things as they are, he was right; it wouldn't be a matter of letting him anyway.
The moment where Aziraphale is pulled towards that prospect, considers it, isn't a terrible one. Quite the opposite. The moment off on the horizon is slated to be terrible. ]